it's just my humble opinion. There isn't anything wrong with your writing style. it's just that having to read his name after every two or three sentences breaks up the flow and annoyes the hell outta me. And besides it's not like there is any other person around him. Also PLS include his thoughts as well ✌️

PLS stop using his name in every sentence 🙏

didn't turn white a few chapters back

Bro I Think there is a few paragraphs missing here🤔😐😐😔

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Shouldn't his ten fold system work on resource types buildings??

pls write it bro.😃😃

Shouldn't his ten fold system work on resource buildings too??

Bro pls stop writing this kind of paragraph we can do the math on our own

Demons-yes

You think walnut is a cute name🤔😑

Thank God you changed that name

Horrible name pls change it author plssssssss

Bro you are wrong in an epic level

Bro please do not mix up the genders. She**

Bro when are you going to update ?? dying to read more

Bro the novel is good and has potential. Keep up the good word. Oh and pls try to make the chapters longer as it is too short. If your charters are too short people won't like it and there will be many problems I say from experience as I also faced those issues

Sorry bro I have been missing for some time now. I started this novel for fun but for some reasons I got really demotivated to continue it. But I am alright now and am hoping to make a comeback. Hope you guys like my novel and support it

A new chapter has been released hope you guys like it

A new chapter has been released hope you like it