Still trying to figure out why:1. People pay real money to read novels here2. Everyone is more concerned about content than grammar and repeated sentences, paragraphs, chapters ect.
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True! dialog doesn't need to be grammatically correct and when i done made my suggestions it was less about grammar and more about making sense while reading. My apologies then, i didn't realize it was intentional. BTW lovin the story and keep up the good work👍
"and so (has) its recovery"
might want to swap out (do) for (can) or (are)
Right! the story so far has been surprisingly good other than the occasional repeats and i could probably ignore them, but to have the paid chapters start on Ch. 27!!?? out of the 200+ chapters available SMH its simply Unforgiveable!! thats what i call a truly "shameless author"
And thats a governments biggest fear!
✅️And there not wrong
It looks like 2 different ways to say this got combined and i believe the word you're looking for is (hang) not grab. 1. And he quickly got the "hang" of it. 2. And he got the "hang" of it in an instant.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
(completely intact )
also, a repeat chapter