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Honestly kinda disappointed in the way the is written Yeah I get that it’s a hero story but too much heroism for me it’s a pe existing world so I won’t give you 5 stars for that I simply don’t like the story in general because I don’t really like heroes but it a ok fic

Can you improve the quality a bit more please I’ve read too many Chinese fanfics bye mistake (it would surprise you how many badly translated stories there are it feels like it’s making me dumber )

Chinese story No real character development mc gets what he wants with no real effort The world background isn’t even right demon slayer breathing techniques aren’t even in one piece and the story is just lazy writing A nine year old can probably imagine a more stable plot

True as can be

Probably

Where is china in the Pokémon world

Gojo was a playboy in canon I believe that why he didn’t have a girl because he wasn’t serious and couldn’t be with only one do you know a girl in canon that would actually except that typ of relationship for a long time

It would fit the clan his in (Bloodlines and all) but it wouldn’t have much impact on the main character so I’ll say 3 at most but two is fine Gojo would 100% have more of a open thing going on Where he’s allowed to be with other people but not the girls

Honestly it’s a good fic

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