MenacingLeaf

I can't wait I hope it is really soon!!

I am reading these reviews after writing mine and I completely agree!! I hope the author returns. The story is well-written, unique, and compelling. They were definitely finding their stride in their formatting and story telling and I would enjoy to have so much more!

I hope the author sees this. The improvement and the format improves dramatically over the chapters which I was really happy about, and the details are plenty! I loved the development of the protagonist! I noticed we get to enoy 2 main characters which is awesome! I see it hasn't been updated but I got addicted. To the author, evilmunky45, may you please comeback! Your writing style is fantastic and has much potential. I don't want to give you anything less of a perfect score. This world you are making is too cool. I felt compelled to write this hoping you read it. Please come back and write so that my stability of updates score on this book can be true!! I need more! \(T~T)/ I will reread this again if you update it!

Wow! Okay so your writing has improved dramatically since the first chapter or even the prologue. Like the format is really good, so much improvement on this chapter. And the grammar has been good! It is very descriptive. It's a lot of reading, but I like that a lot, I can really see it all happening in my imagination. There's a few mistakes sprinkled here and there but you write a lot so am guessing it is bound to happen. Ta'ro seems to have found conviction! This hasn't been updated in so long though. Author will you be writing more?

Wow this is really detailed, I like how these two were introduced! Also I noticed by the end of it that it got easier to read!

Great description but like other reader states, this are some big paragraphs. Maybe smaller ones will make it easier to read?

So like compared to other stuff this has lots of detail and based on the grammar I am guessing a native English speaker. I still enjoy other stuff but this seems like a much easier read compared to others. And I like the setup you have going on so far, assuming that's what the prolouge is [img=recommend]