El_Famoso

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2023-04-14 Se unióUnited States

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El_Famoso4 months ago
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Please author, go easy on the anaphoras. It’s alright once in a while, but not three times in every chapter. It’s becoming more and more cringey.
"Together, we can elevate Kandria to even greater heights," he continued. "Together, we can manifest Kandria's true potential rather than burying it forever. Together, we can accomplish the impossible."
The Martial Unity
Acción · Lord_Streak
El_Famoso4 months ago
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Author must be a fun guy to hang out with
Male Karen and Two Pets Killed by Florida Man During Pokemon Fight
Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World
Fantasía · DamnPlotArmor
El_Famoso4 months ago
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Sounds promising, knowing that the author rarely disappoints ! I will wait until there are at least 50 chapters to binge-read them.
Dual Cultivation: Beasts and Women!
Fantasía · RVN_1998
El_Famoso4 months ago
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Haldir ? Author, please make an effort !
"Haldir, take Vicente Fuller to the council. The other two will stay outside the village to wait for their companion." Said one elf, surprising the three travelers by saying Vicente's name.
Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
Fantasía · RVN_1998
El_Famoso5 months ago
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Wait, what about Kugelblitz’s hero and Ghosty ? That’s confusing
'I can't allow anyone that knows about my ability to survive,' Nick thought before he turned into mist.
Kill the Sun
Fantasía · Warmaisach
El_Famoso6 months ago
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Ponzi scheme haiya
If you're interested, I'm part of a pro-alien guild that's one of the strongest in Examire. If you go there with this item, you'll have good chances on your way." Minos handed them an item similar to the one his group had received when they were invited to Armhands.
The Rise of the Black Plain
Fantasía · RVN_1998
El_Famoso7 months ago
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Please, author : les filler and more action !!
Then, as he opened his eyes and stood up, the lamia on his necklace said to him. "Congratulations on your breakthrough. You should be able to free me now, shouldn't you?"
Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
Fantasía · RVN_1998
El_Famoso10 months ago
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Titus, not Torne. Wrong novel ! It should be I Became a Mafia Boss in Another World.
After bringing Henry to the Spatial Kingdom, Minos stayed permanently in that region of space to finally begin his experiments with Torne and develop methods compatible with what he had received from the ancient curse in Albano.
The Rise of the Black Plain
Fantasía · RVN_1998
El_Famoso10 months ago
respondió a Epic_Child
It’s a stylistic device
She shook when she heard that. As for the boy, he didn't understand a word of what was being said, but his mother's somber anxiety had trickled into him. He felt his throat choking up, as tears welled up , threatening to spill despite his furious endurance. His breathing grew more agitated and laboured as the conversation progressed, and his mother's despair grew more palpable, he felt like he was trekking a mountain. He felt like he was being snuffed by a pillow. He felt as though the air was growing thinner.
The Martial Unity
Acción · Lord_Streak
El_Famoso10 months ago
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« With our super strong bodies » it’s okay to increase word count reasonably, since your income depends on it, but when you add these kinds of annoying expressions, the readers will quickly get sick of the novel. One full chapter to describe a very short, almost instantaneous fight…
Ch 2088 Defeating a Sovereign
The Rise of the Black Plain
Fantasía · RVN_1998