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Did you mean villains with no morals, motives, and just, boringly evil?I think the same, by heart I can say my favourite, recent villains would be Light Yagami from Death Note, Lelouch from Code Geass and Thanos.I don't know how much chapters you read, but there will be many kind of villains: "complex" or "quick" in varying degrees with respect to the situation.Cain would be a pretty good example of one more on the complex side.Basically, as I wrote in the review I want to write all kinds of personalities...If I got you curious the chapters are waiting for you😄👋

For now, I'm taking it as a daily hobby... so no. Thanks anyway for asking! Hope you're enjoying the story!

May I help you? :) I suppose the sentence was quite long and not immediate to understand...(?)

I'll improve to make it so for me too... Thanks a lot for the review!

I'm relly happy you're enjoying it so far!

Even if quite short, thanks for the honest review. As it was the first one not coming from a review swap, it feels special to me. I hope you're enjoying reading the story. Have a great day!

Thanks a lot for the correction! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story!

Thank you for you donation! The fact that you were the first gives it even more value to me. I hope you will continue to enjoy reading the story going on. Have a great day!

The review is based on the first impression I had of the novel, evaluating the book cover, synopsis, and the first chapter. In the complex an enjoyable read, due to the high writing quality. The book cover is eye-catching and the synopsis is pertinent to the story. The main negative detail I feel is worth saying is the division of the universe presented not quite clearly in the first chapter. The events' narration doesn't seem fast, normal, or quite slow depending on personal taste, if compared to the synopsis. The update frequency seems high and constant. Finally, the reader is advised to who's into sci-fi and reincarnation. Keep it up, author!👍

First of all, thank you for the feedback. English is not my first language so I'm sure my grammar isn't perfect. For proofreading, I'm mainly relying on Grammarly. In the synopsis, I tried mainly to arouse the curiosity of the possible reader. If you have already read the first chapter and find the way it's written unclear, I would ask you to go into more actionable details. Even though I'll try to improve the how I find interesting seeing any possible natural improvement in my writing style in the next future. I hope you'll be there when that happens! Have a great day👋