Jeremy_Smith_6986

Honestly this gets close to the perfect Harry Potter Fanfic... It has new characters with interesting personalities and to top it all off, a great ability which isn't presented as completely broken but rather something he needs to explore to properly use. Great work!

The overall story is good, just very frustrating that he's so cautious and doesn't seem to even consider getting the "Confession" quirk which would work perfectly with his...

Ohh smart... hadn't thought of that