I have to say that the first chapter was awful in my opinion. The MC transmigrates and we're immediately talking to Riser then suddenly getting a BJ and then boom parents that we've only known for about 10 sentences are already dead. That is awful pacing and I don't feel connected to any characters. Spend more time actually developing these characters instead of just speed running your plot. I was especially confused when the MC was sad about the parents death, because even though he got memories of them, we didn't see any of them so seeing him mourning their death was more weird than sad.

You should only read this novel if you're into pedophilia. Seriously it's so disgusting that the author is having a grown man having romantic and possibly sexual relationship with high schoolers then justify it by saying "if life gives you lemon make lemonade". He/She could've simply made the MC a student instead of a teacher but nooo had to have that age gap. If you read this you're a weirdo.

Taylor in this story is slowly getting more and more unattractive in my eyes.

Your doing God's work ma boy

It's good but there doesn't need to be THAT much space between the paragraphs and also please don't let the MC do the deed with the sisters until their older. I'm not trying to watch 14 year olds have s*x.

There's nothing really special here. Big harem that didn't seem to have much thought put into it. Though the idea is unique it's ruined by bad writing that fails to capitalize on it.

That still does not mean he is more talented than Natsu. Even as a child Natsu was taking on monsters that adults couldn't handle so he was strong and talented from the start,

This is amazing so far but like what other people have said the s*x scenes should be a bit longer and have more focus. I meant it is a HENTAI novel. But besides that I really enjoy the time he's spending with Emi and love their interactions.

Why hasn't be named Shauna and Benimaru yet?

Bro this is not valid at all. It's a slice of life you can't expect constant action like your reading JJK. To me every chapter has been enjoyable and actually way better than I thought this novel was going to be

I love these moments so much. I love that the author is taking the time to show these types of interactions instead of just showing a bunch of action. It really makes me connect with the characters more and puts a smile on my face.

I'm confused, What was this chapter?

It's cool it's not a huge problem. Thanks for the chapter though.

I really liked it, though I don't think there needs to be THAT much space between the paragraphs. It's a bit weird to look at.

Sigh the Scott slander is real. I don't know what's wrong with ya'll but Scott in my goat especially after X-Men 97'

Lemme just say I love everything else about the chapter since I forgot to mention that and I don't want to seem like I only have bad things to say. I just can't stand this particular thing since I've seen it way too many times.

Uhhhh...Who's gonna tell him?

Yessss let's goooo!!

I think you did a good job to introduce the characters in a natural way

Bro image a 40 year old pretending to be a 16 year old to attend an academy of teenagers. Does no one else finds this creepy asf?