Brandon_5903

thank you for the review

The story has a interesting and unique concept that can be expanded if the world is described in more detail and the characters at some point were given names because in my own opinion. The way the characters are described is a good outline for later on to give them more information on why they are there. The pacing in the story is good and I am interested in what comes next

Thank you for the review and the feedback

Thank you for the review and your feedback

yes thank you

From the chapters I have read I have enjoyed the story so far. The pace is good and the description of the character and the way the react to the things that happen around then sounds realistic and believable. The story is well written and is readable overall I would keep a eye on this story to see how it progress in the future

your welcome were you able to review my book as well

From what I have read the first chapter creates a good foundation for the story to be built up upon. The characters are described well. But at least for me the description of the world itself should be flushed out more. The first chapter sets up several intriguing story pieces as the parents and the experiment the MC went. It would befit the story in saying it's in the future this would give more creative freedom to work with more sci fi ideas and concepts that may befit your overall story like alien races, planets or other kinds of things that would give your story a more distinctive feel. But i think it's a good story and we'll be sure to keep up with it

Thank you for the feedback

Thank you for the review