GuktarTheGallant

silveria: "divine this", "divine that", "your connection to elder sister and myself interferes with your ability to use SUCH ENERGIES". is the mc not WAY TOOO oblivious and naive. for a self made man in his teenage years whose amassed a fortune on the basis of positives and negatives (programming)?

also watching an author grow is the main reason I read light novels. 10 chaps isnt even a dip of the toes

I read the first 10 chapters. I'm now gonna make a comment that implies I havent even read the first chapter. dumb comment

this is dumb. who heads with the top of their head? peripherals being affected? absolutely! form? especially from a tall slender young man with extreme flexibility and strong core? fuck no. loving story so far ;p

4 goal celebrations. set pieces, sounds like a fair number of fouls. and a player injury requiring staff, and quick first aid. 2 minutes of stoppage time. asshole refs

I think already my new favourite running joke in literature. lols

thx for the chapter. pumped for more

so I wasn't the only that kept saying wingdings instead of nightwings?

is it really that weird? miguel sounds like both michelle and michael at once. and I find it a lot less masculine than names like Frank, Jared, or Ron (short form), which are names of woman I actually know

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule