ambt05

The blurb was confusing, but the edited chapters were well paced and very interesting !

I have no complaints - it’s perhaps heavy on the chapters-long fight scenes but that’s a personal preference and I know many love this.

Good story, a little heavy on the face slapping but overall very enjoyable. Thanks for not making it a harem!

The story is interesting and if it weren’t for the simplistic female characters I’d keep reading. Why are they behaving more like a litter of jealous puppies than individual humans? It’s pretty common in this platform, but is it necessary? I do really like the story - very interesting considering the genre!

I like the ideas but there is way, way too much time spent pontificating and expounding on them. Great story line, I like the gender bending, I like the direction the plot appears to be heading but I got bored with the detailed philosophy that felt like I was reading someone’s journal of personal revelations.

I can say that I listened to nearly 200 chapters before finally giving up on it. It’s a really cute story and I liked most of the characters. My issue is with the series of predictable and redundant situations/dialogue. Very good for a first time novel.