Eminence_TheGreen
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Eminence_TheGreen6dPublicado porI dont know but I hate that it shows up on my fucking screen every two seconds and that it immediately becomes the story I'm reading when I open the app I haven't even pressed it it just did it, i know it's not your fault author san but Its , I wont give you a bad rating because you did nothing to me
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moves
The woman's movies signified some sort of military training or at least some combat training in the past as she didn't even break a sweat in dealing with a man bigger than her. Expertly removing the weapon's magazine, she proceeded to empty it and disassemble the weapon itself. - Eminence_TheGreen21dComentado por
I am confusion
Sakuno nailed an explosive leaf to the Jounin and kicked him at his comrades who grabbed him by instinct, "BOOM!" the explosion caused the surrounding smoke to come out and show only the bodies of several scorched ninjas. - Eminence_TheGreen21dComentado por
I'll never let you train again - correction I would correct some other stuff but honestly please proofread before posting your chapters
Aika was silent looking at her daughter for a while trying to find some trace of lie and finally looked away, "It's ok I'll let you pass this time but if you ever come back late and not accompanied by your Uncle I'll never leave you again train!" Aika said firmly in her voice. - Eminence_TheGreen21dComentado porCh 40 Gleipnir (5)
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repeated
Riser Phenex was alone in the training room, a space marked by the intensity of his abilities. The environment was destroyed, witness to the blue and red flames that evidenced the voracity of the powers he was trying to control. - Eminence_TheGreen26dComentado por
hermoine breathe- correction
"Hermione breath! He'll be fine. You father just went to get him a food and water bowl. And don't worry about where he'll sleep, he's a cat, they will sleep wherever they want to sleep. And no, I doubt a cat that big would enjoy a walk as much as a dog does so you don't need to worry about that either." - Eminence_TheGreen26drespondió a EvilBlueCrystal
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he just did
Tamaki merely nodded his head in agreement. The two looked really funny standing next to each other with the fact that ones hair is red and the other is blue. It just feels so weird. Not that he'd ever openly say it of course. - Eminence_TheGreen1mthComentado por
i know I can't make you change your story because of how far it is Advanced but this is not how Power Systems work he's in DxD not in katekyu Hitman okay so some random human n***** from DxD cannot use a freaking ability from a different universe that's not how it works he can use it( the mc ) because he has a system a template, this n***** ( the guy asking him to teach him to become stronger) can't just magically learn the freaking ability it's not a DxD related ability it's not like his templates( the mc) immediately changes the entire universe's power structure it's not going to make it so anybody can awaken these powers from other universes that's not how it works if you want something like physical capabilities like say from One Piece like rankyaku that would make sense because it's just physical capabilities it's not actual a supernatural power
I look at him for a few seconds before my new power feels something within him. I can feel him awakening the Dying Will Flame. I can feel his rage and make the flame within him flicker. I can feel the flame that wants to destroy anything it touches from within him. He can awaken the Storm Flame. - Eminence_TheGreen1mthrespondió a Eminence_TheGreenCh 1 Chapter 1: The Beginning
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so for the past 18 Years n**** just existed like you couldn't do some push-ups some squats something to arm yourself against vampires Niger like you had so much time you know the world that you were in and you did nothing just accepted your fate just just kill yourself but you're useless oh I got a system now so obviously I'm going to become super power and overpowered like n**** you couldn't just work before that so that it would be easier to use the system in the first place or did you never think about that cuz obviously you don't have a family in this world based on what you're saying yeah got to be an orphan or some s*** and if you had family you would be trying to fight or survive in this world getting some meager I'm not that strength so you could kill some people and live.( I'm in the first few paragraphs and I already have a headache how could you be this pathetic it's not like hecdidn't know the world he knew what the world was like)
Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Beginning - Eminence_TheGreen1mthrespondió a Eminence_TheGreen
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