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it's good. mtl til 667 world building is great how different nations react is mostly accurate but mc and Bulgaria is unnecessarily overpowered when there is really no reason for him to be but that is just nitpicking 7/10
legendary novel but please improve the translation
This novel redefines the genre. rather than conquering the world in 50 years it presents the most realistic view of history possible. the attention to details is just legendary but honestly, bro you gotta stop writing 'interest' twice every chapter
read upto 300 chapters and the author has managed to kill everything that could have made the story special. the story becomes increasingly linear and follows the same chinese first disciple then master then comes hidden elder. the story stagnates so the author added unnecessary character insights that don't ever connect to the story at all. the mc is literally an immortal so at least time lapses could have been added to revamp the story line but at the end of the day this is one of the hardest troupes to write so i guess i can't criticise too much
It doesn't make sense for the author to describe the souls as small and big and not have a proper quantization of the amount of soul. Anyway you can just add the feature of assigning values to the souls like lowest low rank will be one and the number increases with quantity, with Gabriel's soul be 1×10^-24 of a holy soul or something
what exactly is ou huang