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The story is interesting and is a potential one, however I need to say there is a lack of description at places, which makes it hard to imagine when reading. Also, at some places, it's confusing, like it's just happening because MC wants to do it without any motivation behind his actions, also, the first chapter is a bit confusing. So if the author could spare some time to edit the initial chapters, I can say it will reach more audience. Keep up the good work author
instead of directly coming to dialogue, maybe we can add a para or two explaining the world background he teleported to
omg!! this is such a nice carefully pieced para
lol
yup...so be afraid of crazy ppl, hehe
it isn't
it's isn't
duh.....
I like women who fight
lol
I liked this writing style. It's simple and easy to follow. The opening scene is interesting, which grasps one's interest. The author did a very good job in balancing the dialogue and description. The character design is good, the world background is nicely explained. Keep up the good work author
she is fierce
lol...I like this
yes....it happens often to me too
wise
As I said earlier, this is one of the finest writings. The writing quality is very good and the flow is very natural, I appreciate the author for his explanation in the author's thoughts section about the terms used in the novel. The world background, character designing and story development is good. Overall, it's a very good novel, which has lots of potential in it. Keep up the good work author
I have read many isekai novels, but this is a truly unique novel and kinda new concept. I enjoyed reading this and the writing quality is also good, the flow is maintained well. The updating stability is also maintained well. Overall, it's an interesting novel and worthy of one's time. Keep up the good work author