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I guess it's Yugito, and the MC changed everything.

Damn, it's a factor, I mean, there are people who support Itachi and criticize Sasuke, when Sasuke's reaction is normal.

I didn't read your story, but here's some advice as a writer: have confidence in yourself. There will always be negative comments, and I suggest two ways to evaluate whether an opinion is negative or not Check the commenter's profile. If they only leave negative comments on your story and others, their opinion probably doesn't have much value. Consider if their criticism can help you improve. If so, thank them for the suggestion and discard the rest. It's simple. Many negative comments are insignificant. Then there are the neutral comments, which you can ignore or respond to. If you see that someone responds with logic and respect, give them a “like” and thank them. In short: accept constructive criticism, ignore those who seek to annoy, and value those who thank you for your work with a simple “thanks for the chapter.” Those readers, even if they write something short, really appreciate what you do.

In Naruto there is a girl that what is drawn comes true, with this things it would be op, I can already imagine something like the giant painting of the world of Ariamis [Dark soul]

Great script, but oh well, it seems that no reader cares and they just ignore it, let's let it cook...

I recommend that you not use artificial intelligence so much, the story begins to seem artificial and that is the worst thing that can happen to a story, because it becomes monotonous, boring, and predictable, the last chapters seem too artificial and the more I read, the worse it gets.

It reminds me of my old movie where the cats and dogs are spies, and they fight, something like that was

Doesn't it appear in a different place???

bandages up to the elbow