I would love to see aemon reaction

😂😂

Like your work man just try to add more brutality and blood becomes this is the time period where blood is flowing like water

Still it's not easy because he is not shooting them with guns he is using a sword with require muscle mass and stamina to fight and he is 12 it is not possible at that age to fight several people with sword at 14 or 16 it will become be believe able 12 is little to young rest it's story still better than other gpt story and use curse wording and blood and Gore to make it feel more realistic

Great start but too much gpt and no character prospective no goal other then doing stupid things 🤦😮‍💨 bro you started great and with great story in mind but gpt ruined it all there no character development mc is fool I'll be not surprised in next chapter he is licking the boots of king of iron throne and why f mc will care for the iron throne if he wakes up north is free no more iron throne because there is only one king of the north who's name is stark and make him fucking brandon brother and stop making a fool out of him make him ruthless or like tywin because he is a fucking legend according to your story he will not be some ' yes sir ' type person be belongs to a ruthless aggressive era borth fighting with children of forest and ice demons so develop in that way

What the fuxk is that 🤦 and why he is your grace to mc 🤦 he is the oldest most scariest person in the north he who is called the one man army he who is called the ice dragon for the amount of destruction he did in his time is bowing and saying your grace to a dragon spawn it's outrageous

How howw he can at the age of 12 he can fight with not 1 or 2 but many war experience fighters and killers bro clam down hold your high horse try to make him atleast little bit realistic but what you are writing is not possible in any world if you want to show him strong atleast make him older

Finally

To cause future funny incident were people confuse him as Morgana descendent 🤣🤣

Truee

Andd fuxkkkk 🤣🤣🤣🤣 now I can see she will not take the moon tea before going to his brother and when aegon is born he will be his son not his brothers 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Just don't ruin his character I have seen many author ruin mc character to give them maturity so keep that in mind

Totally agree with author about kaguya full support 🔥🔥

Bro too much gpt

Why not professor and Dumbledore approved

Love your way of thinking it's kinda similar to mine 🔥

Total agree +1

You know this jon is savage 🔥 and best advice make him reborn in house of dragon time period

You know this is the great passing the torch movement some even say the old king have pass his responsibility and authority ( because of dragon) to the new young King (aemon) removing his father from the picture and various other kind of mummer will raise in Kingslanding like how the king chosen his own demise and welcome stranger with open arms with all his grace and pride without any fear in the presence of his grandchildren and his oldest friends. Others like how king and queen dragons have chosen a new king and queen bro best advice try to make the next chapter more legendary as possible 🔥 the king have been fallen long live the king 👑🔥