DBSH

Though AI, this is not bad... Really, though I don't like this type of chapters too, this one didn't made me mad or something like that. In fact it's ok, I would prefer other authors to do something similar, if they need one. But this works only in case information here is valid 😌

First of all terrorist is the one who cause terror. That's all. There is no rule that he must kill people or even torture them physically. While they are terrified he is terrorist. If we stick to the definition, the root is in "the use or threat of grave violence against civilians to achieve political, religious, or ideological goals". It still matches, cause there is a threat on the first place. About being "not bad enough" 😒. He beat Spider-Gwen to a pulp, scared civilians out of their wits, killed dudes without hesitation and mentally tortured people here and there. Just read the story and don't write BS.

Tftc

Do not use LAZY to describe Brick. Stop using BLUSH to describe Blossom. AI SLOP! It makes me I'll!!! In short: similar adverbs repeat again and again and again and again and again and again.... Irritating, right? And the Brick acts the same, always, and blossom reacts same, always. Kinda... Weak plot and writing, with ai-issues.

+5

Tftc

Yup, we noticed. Tftc 🙌

Tftc, you can release chapters slower, but make them bigger please. 2 chapters can be easily merged into 1, moreover, these 4 chapters can be merged into 1, and it will be descent size for chapter.

TL;DR: The book is cool. 3 star comments are so biased and unreasonable that it makes me feel ill. The main hero feels more like an antihero indeed, killing bad guys and causing chaos here and there, though from a police and hero side he can be considered a villain, cause he damage objects and mentally torture innocent people too. My main issues with this fanfiction are the overly short chapters and the fact that everyone overreacts to yet another looney. And while the author isn't a novice, it sometimes feels that way. He describes the MC as a perfect human—he's handsome (which is pointed out way too many times), all-knowing, and mysterious. While that kind of praise makes sense in a livestream chat, it feels cringe when it comes from a TV news broadcast. On the news, he should be depicted as a terrorist; they should be focusing on the danger and damage he caused, not his personality. It feels like the story is romanticizing his actions, which would have serious legal consequences for a TV studio in the real world