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2023-02-20 Se unióGlobal
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_12h
    respondió a bearateme_

    I'll add the information about soul weapons in the world building and power system chapter to make it easier for everyone to understand.

    Ch 4 Final results
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_12h
    respondió a SoManyAngels

    the last name of siblings is a typo, will correct that. The soul weapons aren't ranked as they depend on the affinity one has with mana. also why the reporter just died, I'll explain it again. thanks for pointing it out

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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1d
    respondió a El_dorado

    thankss 😁

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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1d
    Publicado por

    Pretty good concept, the grammar is proper as well. I like the dialogues and lines used in different places- Look forward to what happens next. Best of luckk!

    Cursed Candy Craver | Reincarnated Into A Dead Kid’s Food Power System
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1d
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    Love how the story goes, pretty good dialogues

    Ch 1 A Bitter Taste Of A Sweetened Life
    Cursed Candy Craver | Reincarnated Into A Dead Kid’s Food Power System
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1d
    respondió a Vanilla_Chino

    thank youu

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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_2d
    Publicado por

    Quite an interesting turn of events in the story, I like the story idea. Especially the synopsis sounds pretty inviting! Look forward to more chapters 😁

    Conquest of Taboo and Debauchery
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_2d
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    Great read! I wonder if the main character will be evil or like the villain or will soften up while living with his new family. Look forward to more chapters!!!

    Ruthless Rebirth of Conqueror
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_2d
    respondió a Shadowwarrior_007

    thank you😁

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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_2d
    respondió a Spirit_Immortal

    thankss

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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_2d
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    The grammar is pretty good and I look forward to reading ahead! Added to my reading listt. The plot was prettty interesting. as well :>

    The Sugar Sweetened System
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_2d
    respondió a El_dorado

    thanks 😁

    Ch 1 An old voice?
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_14d
    respondió a nightwolf2007

    read more to find out🫂, also I'm in the process of editing all my chapters and will be re uploading them as i said in my latest chapter from 10th June 😁

     "To think that I would have a chance to obtain a bloodline…Was I right with the theory that my blood powers and that man I met is actually my ancestor who bestowed me these abilities or more known as 'gift' of blood?" Caedes thought out loud, feeling that this was most probable.
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_30d
    respondió a apaxgod

    I've edited the synopsis you can check there, reading or not is totally up to you. no hard feelings.

    Ch 30 The boss room
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_30d
    respondió a apaxgod

    bro just stop, if you don't wanna read the book then just go, stop spreading unnecessary false hate stuff you're just guessing-

    Ch 30 The boss room
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_30d
    respondió a apaxgod

    who the hell said anything about him being a death god😂 ykw just forget it

    Ch 30 The boss room
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_30d
    respondió a apaxgod

    the main character is not the death god in the first place, it would be revealed a few chapters later but sure if you wanna leave-

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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1mth
    respondió a stayygold04

    they died in the previous chapter already, bursting into pools of blood-

    Swinging it a few times, he got used to the size and walked over to the place where Simon died. He kneeled down while carefully picking up the man's space ring.
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1mth
    respondió a apaxgod

    My ML isn't the one who'll just wake up and be a god😭😭 I plan to slowly develop and unravel his character and powers. Please give the book a few more chapters, you'll start to understand the whole basic plot of the book as that is soon going to be introduced by the next 10-13chapters. What you're reading now is just the foundation for the main plot✨ I look forward to more doubts and suggestions by ya- love that.

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
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  • bearateme_
    bearateme_1mth
    respondió a apaxgod

    if it was not clear in my chapters then I'll edit an explanation for that too, thanks for pointing it out too💪🏻

    However, this just made him more excited, because it meant that his family was still alive!
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