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Pretty good concept, the grammar is proper as well. I like the dialogues and lines used in different places- Look forward to what happens next. Best of luckk!
read more to find out🫂, also I'm in the process of editing all my chapters and will be re uploading them as i said in my latest chapter from 10th June 😁
they died in the previous chapter already, bursting into pools of blood-
My ML isn't the one who'll just wake up and be a god😭😭 I plan to slowly develop and unravel his character and powers. Please give the book a few more chapters, you'll start to understand the whole basic plot of the book as that is soon going to be introduced by the next 10-13chapters. What you're reading now is just the foundation for the main plot✨ I look forward to more doubts and suggestions by ya- love that.
if it was not clear in my chapters then I'll edit an explanation for that too, thanks for pointing it out too💪🏻