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Moist_BedBugsa month agoPublicado porI'm definitely a totally original author and not copying SuperNerd's review format. Writing Quality 4/5 : Compared to the other RI fanfics I feel that it's decently well written. I could definitely improve on the first person chapters and make a happy one for once but I probably won't. i.e. every first person chapter is gonna be a tragedy. Update Stability 4/5: I upload frequently unless it's exam season but I don't upload daily or anything like White Shadow. Character Design 5/5: I design my characters decently well, I think. I haven't shown it off much as I write this review but I hope I can in the future. World Background 5/5: It's RI man, what do you expect? Story Development 3.75-4/5: Yeah, this is the aspect I need to improve. Like, I've got some REALLY cool stuff planned out but it's a bit difficult in terms of execution.
- Moist_BedBugsa month agorespondió a Romance_guy
Nope. Just overwhelmed with emotions after he escaped slavery and all. He'll calm down in a while, his personality will still remain the same.
- Moist_BedBugs2 months agorespondió a Calamixy
Naturally there will be new wind path gu but variant humans, I'm not sure. i would need to make a legends of Ren Zhu chapter about them to add them to the story
- Moist_BedBugs2 months agorespondió a Ruckducker
He will likely stick with wind path till the end of the story. Although, I might go back on it if I decide something else.
- Moist_BedBugs2 months agorespondió a _Rex
This fanfic is the "original version", my rewrite of this fanfic would be mentioned in the "updates" channel of the discord server, and it's pinned in the channel under the name of my fic
- Moist_BedBugs3 months agorespondió a FLACKO
Hey! I needed to write this chapter to prepare for another important Legend Of Ren Zhu episode!
- Moist_BedBugs3 months agorespondió a Ruckducker
you're not supposed to rn. I'll add more and more to let the viewers piece it together throughout the course of the story.
- Moist_BedBugs3 months agorespondió a Romance_guy
Well, I haven't completely planned it out yet, but I do plan for him to be a more selfish person towards the end of the story
- Moist_BedBugs4 months agorespondió a Sweatysausage
Well, there will be something like that later on in the story. I'll give a small spoiler. Tai Qing is not what he seems to be 👍
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Moist_BedBugs4 months agorespondió a jonknowsnothing
As mentioned before, the poison doesn't have much of an effect on gu masters. It just slows down their movements and they plan to sleep after too.
