Akaruy_Chan

Okk and the writing, is it good? I worry a lot about whether the grammar is good or not, since it affects the reading a lot.

I understand, but since I don't know if you read the announcement I posted on the other one, but the other fanfic I just paused, when I finished putting together your diagram, I saw that I was missing a lot of information. So much of DxD, I watched the anime when it was released each season (which is a long time ago) and started reading the manga now, where I'm still on volume 2, apart from other additional works. So I preferred to gain experience and have time to gather and establish a solid vision of what I'm going to write. So much so that in this fanfic I pulled to the harem side and will develop it in a slower and more detailed way, while the other one I decided to focus on the events themselves and without much additional , Rushado so to speak, besides being without harem or romance. Where Mc will stand against the main characters and will crush them.

I was planning to put minamoto in raikou, or another Japanese spirit

The Fate ones I already decided 1, but jeanne would be interesting.

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Thank you very much, I sincerely hope you enjoy reading!!

I am thinking of putting her with issei, so that he has some 'influence' in the underworld, just for this reason.

Serafall I'm thinking of placing, I like her. Ingvild I am in doubt between her, lavinia and another. The rest are some that I don't know, but some I am already sure about. Benia will be a fan girl, Tomoe if I'm not mistaken is a shotacon, Ravel I'm thinking of putting in issei's mini harem (he will have a 'small' one) and will be formed only by the church trio(a that I don't like very much) which is Asia(honestly too stupid for my taste), Xenovia(extreme airhead, I don't like her much either), Irina(I like her, but honestly in my opinion she would be the only one that issei really 'deserves') and another one I don't know. But about the harem it's a that spoiler, the rest is just waiting .