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  • Gazeli_Gazeli
    Gazeli_Gazelia year ago
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    The first 10 chapters are difficult to read, the protagonist is lacking testosterone but after he shows his power he gets better, another flaw is that every girl is a good person and every man is a dumb young master, which doesn't make sense since the The strongest are always men and so far only the protagonist seems to be male and intelligent, but it became interesting thanks to zhang, I hope he kills some of the MC's women as revenge

  • Gazeli_Gazeli
    Gazeli_Gazelia year ago
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    Dude, I have to be honest, this pattern of every woman being good and every man being bad is annoying, it's okay that it's a harem but there's no need to force every woman as if she were an angel, his sister, girls from the zhao family, qian , and all men are dumb and young masters

  • Gazeli_Gazeli
    Gazeli_Gazelia year ago
    respondió a luisfer

    Planet Vegeta is destroyed in the year 737

  • Gazeli_Gazeli
    Gazeli_Gazeli2 years ago
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    finally good work, you can read it's good finally good work, you can read it's good finally good work, you can read it's goodfinally good work, you can read it's good

  • Gazeli_Gazeli
    Gazeli_Gazeli2 years ago
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    Pleasant protagonist, not a conspiracy idiot, treats people well and has no arrogance, I was already fed up with arrogant and "evil" protagonists in naruto fanfic, I hope it continues like this, you don't have to be a hero but if you continue to be a good one person is enough