Davidrain666

Marquis*

now that is one helluva line

Happy birthday Zman

Keep up the great work. By far one of the best novels I've picked up in a while

honestly kinda annoying how nonstop this shit is

And here I am, back again to reread this gem

I've completely lost track of how old he is.

you lie about your surname you've lied about your family.

So much for wearing his name with pride and not hiding himself. starting to wish I hadn't unlocked 100 chaps

I think doing other character povs for a couple chapters isn't a bad idea or a bad thing, but only in moderation. 18 chapters of it uninterrupted is honestly a bit annoying, especially this early in the novel. 18 chapters at this current point is almost 12% of the current chapters lol.