Okaru

Sure! Thank you for your review. Over the past few weeks I have been trying to improve my writing. And you advice would be truly helpful.

I think, the reason I lost the motivation to continue this story is due to the fact that the way I tried to develop Yuma was bad, he seemed unreal, after suffering like in the verge of death he has no character development. And I tried to build the world but it went wrong. So I had only one choice make it a dream, I didn't wanted to do it, but I learnt some stuffs from this you can check out my new work "The Secret of the Weird Detective." Not actually new but it's out of hiatus after chapter 1!

Author here, I wrote the first two chapters as a single chapter until I decided to divide them into two, you might notice that the first chapter was months ago the previous first chapter's content and the content of the current chapter 1 and 2 are the same but a bit different than the original as I remastered some grammatical error. If you might have noticed a bit of change in writing it's cause during that period my writing changed. I'm planning on continuing this series. After Zero Magic Zero Fun (That one didn't end well). Overall I just wanna say please check it out atleast read up to chapter 4, the writing in chapter 1 and 2 might seem inconsistent but I think it should have changed in chapter 3 and 4.

Author here, grammatical mistakes or whatever, as long as you understand what I am writing, it doesn't matter. I am just a half baked writer who just writes for fun. (I kinda stole this line "I am a hero who is a hero just for fun.")

Finally Hyouka LN is available on Web Novel Hope it reaches upto volume 6 unlike the other ones which didn't :) I would be waiting for volume 5 and hope it doesn't gets taken down

FBI OPEN UP

Next Chapters -Scrolls -Secret Of Kaizens -Who is the Kaizen king? Never gonna update soon :) cause Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down