Baitozz

can see your point but i wanted a character who deviated from normal troupes, guess i could try to show how he's uninterested in the reasons instead of just skipping past it

he was saying it out loud but definitely understand how it would be confusing with the way i've written it

thought it was a good idea to use * as action words. have gone for a more internal monologue route in the 2nd draft, makes it a lot more engaging and interesting instead of the emotionless *breath in* breath out* wish i saw your comments earlier

describing environments was something i sucked at, especially when i had a clear vision i completely forgot i actually had to explain it.

haha, i thought the same thing when i came back for the 2nd draft rewrite, this was the first attempt at writing i've ever done so it's riddled with mistakes

Hey everyone it’s the author here, if there’s anyone out there still waiting on the 12th chapter and are worried I’ve quit don’t worry… im still here I ain’t dead yet. I’ll give you guys an update though. After I finished chapter 11 and started chapter 12 I got hit with really bad gastro for around 5 days, basically had me bed ridden. Once I recovered I got around 1/4 of the way done with the chapter but got hit with a massive block, dont know if it was writers block or just lack of experience in the particular scene I was focusing on. So I decided it would be best if I tried writing a variety of one shot ideas I had, similar to manga one shots. I’m currently working on one which is told in an entirely different perspective with different characters. I have dozens of ideas I want to try and get on paper. It’s also made it quite difficult with me going on a 2 week holiday and having to use my barely functional laptop. Thing freezes after every sentence I write. To summarise… I have not lost motivation, far from it. Once I overcome this current hurdle I’m 100% sure I’ll return back to consistent chapter releases. And I’m active over on my Instagram @baitozz over there I post drawings and other things to do with the book. Thank you to everyone that’s read my current work. It’s been a blast and here’s to a future book release.