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Undeadwizard712hrespondió a Holyhandgrenadein the future I plan to send them to other universes.
"I knew Angela was secretly a powerful person but I never suspected she would know that I had knowledge from another world. Even in the novels it is hinted that she is more than she appears. And what is with this prophecy? I have to find two rings and some kind of gemstone for my true journey to begin. Are you telling me that this is just the tutorial? This whole world and whatever is across the sea is just a stepping stone in my journey? Who is pulling the strings of my life like it's some kind of sick puppet show?"- Undeadwizard712hrespondió a Holyhandgrenade
that would be Malkor, Sauron was his lieutenant.
Eragon stares into the distance. "Lord of the Rings…" - Undeadwizard73dComentado porCh 37 Chapter 36
- Undeadwizard74drespondió a Orionwashere
I was thinking that Urgals are just an offshoot of orc that live in the deserts with the Easterlings.
The entire eastern side of middle earth is mostly uncharted territory, making a perfect canvas for me to paint my own narrative. (urgals can be living their, maybe even some surviving Razac). - Undeadwizard712drespondió a Ydryss
elves leave middle earth when they want to die i am pretty sure. the elves in Eragon could just be some of them that had forsaken their immortality only for their children to acquire their high lifespan from the dragons.
If their are any other major inconsistences you can think of between these two works I will try my best to merge them in as lore friendly of a way as I can. I may end up just choosing one or the other in some scenarios. - Undeadwizard713drespondió a FallenEnt
yea, so in my improvised lore it will be dwarves were born from stone in middle earth and in Alagaesia, i kind of want these dragons to be separate from middle earth's seeing as the middle earth ones were made by Malkor and are inherently evil. I will just have humans, elves, urgals, and Razac come from the west.
Eragon shakes his head exasperatedly. "You may be saying that as a joke but it's most likely true. You have to remember that all the elves and humans of Alagaesia came from the continent over the western ocean to here. They never say anything about this other continent in the books but we can infer that it has humans and elves at the very least. Oh wait... The urgals and Razac travel over here as well..." - Undeadwizard713drespondió a 2792sexygarrett
He went super Saiyan blue for a moment there... For real though, I will explain that caveat later. Varaug is a foe that Eragon had zero chance of defeating, it took a max power Eragon and Arya to kill him when he was not fully summoned and was unused to his new body. He could have single handedly killed the entire Varden with how strong this version of him is. And I love the fact that I can make the protagonist's actions have consequences of this magnitude. but please. keep telling me if you find something strange, I am not perfect and appreciate your feedback.
Varaug staggers backwards as a wave of pure power slams into him, driving him to his knees, his confidence shattering as he looks upon Eragon with fear. Eragon's body is shrouded in a bluish light, the power at his fingertips making him feel invincible. - Undeadwizard713drespondió a Ydryss
it was that if the rider dies, the dragon will commit seppuku in grief. I find the notion quite stupid as well.
When he thinks about dying, his thoughts go to Saphira. She would be captured by Galbatorix and turned into a breeding farm for more dragons. He would then make an army of dragon riders that are completely loyal to him and take over all of Alagaesia. - Undeadwizard713drespondió a Chromacorn
Come on! have some more faith... at least twice a year.
I'm back everyone!!! Thank you for your patience and kind words. So I have spent a long time wondering what I was going to do with this novel. After taking a much needed break I started picking apart and fixing some things about the novel. If their are any major mistakes just comment on the paragraph so I can see it. I will no longer be sticking to any upload schedule for releases as it gave me so much stress. Again, thank you for your encouragement. Stay awesome! - Undeadwizard713drespondió a Kr0n
it makes me so sad to hear that. I thought the stone sword was fun and interesting. Maybe i can go all john wick and have him make a pencil just to annoy you guys. tee hee!!!
It doesn't help that in his free time he studies enchanting objects by himself. After much trial and error, his stone sword can easily rival a rider's blade. The sapphire gem fuels a multitude of enchantments ranging from damage negation to size alteration. - Undeadwizard722dComentado porCh 14 13.Plan(2/2)
- Undeadwizard722dComentado porCh 10 The Ork: The Desperation of Narzug
- Undeadwizard722dComentado por"Suck it, Bilbo. You may have a ring that makes you invisible. But I... I have one ring to fool them all."
- Undeadwizard71mthComentado porCh 57 A Shocking Discovery
- Undeadwizard71mthComentado porCh 4 Chapter 4: Time to train !
- Undeadwizard71mthComentado porCh 193 On The Skies To Mist Village - 16
- Undeadwizard71mthComentado porCh 52 Chapter 52. Time for the party (part 1)
- Undeadwizard71mthComentado porCh 64 Chapter 63 : Team Wraith's Leaders