Novel_Lover_2360

It's a good chapter, don't change it

You are a novice writer ,you don't have the requird skills and experience to write such a story , it's obvious from your writing , you may think that twilight is a short easy project , but believe me , on this site no one perfected untill now

No, don't try to white wash it

I mean, I don't mind a relationship with Rosalie, but that spiritual mate thing is not good, he can like and love her, but it's gotta be his choice not some cosmic / natural power setting / forcing it

Everyone asking for the lich not a kind person, but I found it interesting to see what's gonna happen if a regular kind person have the lich powers appeared in such a world

Ok, I was enjoying it,but you need to understand that their are humans too, even if half of them are stupid, tge other half should be sane enough to understand such an obvious thing, and hiromi is a child slapping yourself because you said that a seven years old is a seven years old is something I won't accept reading, so if the story gonna keep moving in the direction, tell to leave, thanks for the chapter author

Hope you get better soon bro

Don't do that again

Don't, killing everyone in konoha is a very bad idea, instead you can take a trip to kumogakure, it will be more than enough, along with the three remains with their clans

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