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You are absolutely right, I am trying to be better. The MC is really not acting like he is in a marvel universe. This is my first time writing any coherent story, and I need to give all characters depth and relevance. Hydra would come at a threat every chance they get, and shield personnel wouldn’t take the word of kid. Thank you for your input I will use your suggestions to make a better story. Thank you and have a goo day.
Thank you and honestly I have been writing the chapters and coming up with how I would like the story to develop as I write each individual chapter. I am trying to make a better foundation and give readers longer chapters that I filled with more depth.
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You are right I am trying to make the story a little more weighty and not rely on pure might. Thanos is a cuniving being I would like for him to weave a web that almost dooms the Mc. Something to push him past his limits.
To ever that is reading this little story thank you. I am writing this to get a better understanding on how to approach writing any kind of story. The first 27 chapters I know I messed up a lot, I am trying something different for the later chapters. I am going to start having the Mc get away from the plot of the hero’s of earth. It’ s going to be him and the wide open universe and a date with Thanos.
2012 some times I forget to add a concrete timeline. My bad this is my first ever writing and an actual story. So if it not very exciting, I’l try to get better.
My bad
Thanks man