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I know I will sound demanding and annoying but please dear author do not extend Aemma's complicated birth scene with an additional 2 chapters. Unless it can be written in exciting way then I have no problem with that hahaha. Thanks for the chapter
Well to be fair Rhaenyra grew up as an only child and know a handful of dragon riders. So meeting another Dragon Lord that has a higher ranking than her family back in Old Valyria wluld have heightend her curiosity
Exactly. Yeah the pacing is on the discretion of the author, and I habr to wait for a 1 or 2 months before attempting to read the story again. It is a really good fanfic, the pacing of the story is too slow where 2 or 3 chapters could have been just compressed into one
Hope the cinfrontation with the Dragon Lords from Vomantis will begin soon.
The chapter feels like a to do list and a instruction manual. Though I have to admit it takes quite an imaginative and creative skill to make the story comprehensive. Its not an info dump as it is specific to the actions and gos of the MC, but it seems lacking
It lacks more POV from Baelon and Aemon. Was hoping to see their reactions before the MCs exile. if they either agree or disagree witg their father's decision
Its weird as Rhaenys being Aemon's heir this time before Baelon's death. Marrying her cousin should stabilize her legitimacy more
Toddler Aegon should answer with a Middle Finger hahaha Otto would not understand it
I think its from Reincarnated Slime anime hahaha not sure
The title should have been "My Slice of Life Adventure on AOT". The story adheres to the cannon that there is only minimal changes. Additionally the MC does not optimize his system even with all the perks and advantages by using it. Its like 5 or 6 chapters only that the system was used by the MC. Was looking forward for the MC to flex a wide variety of skills that he could buy from the system The slice of life genre is good but too use it too much makes the story cringey and looses all the excitemennt