Heman62

Can't you make a watch appearance cloaked or more less conspicuous as when he goes out others will know that watch is very valuable and can get him in trouble

Well it extrimist + Compound V

Don't you think it will look so bulky and if he plays anti-hero it will be really awkward to blend in shadow.

why have you given the sign-in part function to others just give it to the exclusive group leader it is much more enjoyable when MC has a trump card up his sleeve

WOW!!! he is not going to kill them after such betrayal 😐😐😐

Did Kazuku said his technique name to eliminate all the guards. So why is MC is acting all high and mighty in front of the opponent by saying the name & main point as Kazuku has five different elements hearts he can really nullify his lightning with wind jutsu.

Why the FUCK would he should the name of techniques, it was different in anime since have to show which move they are doing but since this is fanfic can't you just say the move name in mind since its ninja battle who the fuck says their move name so that opponent ninja can counter.

Nay, I think this good character profile and I don't when MC go all HERO mode as soon as they find in superhero world. I am more like in building empire all that shit, but still if MC can be little anti-hero it will be good since DC fanfic don't portray this type character. And please don;t let MC think he is a character, it is real word and like it or not I am big fan of multiverse theory and I believe every story is real we just write the glimpse or over view of it.

Instead become Galvan from Ben 10 build different techs and smartest then Tony Stark and control the flow of world from shadows.

Hey author is it necessary to give the each paragraph the title? It just ruins the continuity of the story please remove it and even it is AI generated you don't have to keep the titles.