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I understand your first point but it's not going to be like that, the MC will have very marked their point of view, something I wanted to show with the age was that no matter how young you were, it wouldn't mean they couldn't think for yourself, the MC will have moral dilemmas, but they will be for their own, they won't be infienced by others, but I can't argue with your second point, yes, the writing is garbage, but I do what I can with what I have.
I don't understand your words very well, but if I think that is what I am thinking, it fills me with pride that someone feels this way for something I am writing, I really appreciate and appreciate it
Yes, I think I made a mistake there, I wanted to represent an adolescent relationship, although it's not that far-fetched, I've seen worse, I'm going to change it
(WOW, thank you very much mintu_sharma for the power stones, but seriously, they are not necessary, I write because I like it and it seems that you too, I thank you very much, but it is not necessary, really, seeing how you enjoy what I write It's enough)
Actually, Emma is considered a high alpha level mutant, since it is said that she is at the same level as Xavier, and Xavier is within that category, although it is only a very subjective comparison, only showing that Grace has telepathic powers very powerfuls