Rokonguy

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐ Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like. No / minor spoilers ahead. Wiriting Quality: The book has a nice flow, and the quality is really good. Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 80 chapters in just two days! Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre. Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs. World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little. I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yoursel

Very fun read could do with some more substance, sometimes the story fast tracks events like his business which I thick could have more detail, Good stuff Keep it going! 🙏🙏🙏

An amazing novel! It feels like words aren’t enough to praise how extremely crafted the plot and characters are. ✔️A smart and ruthless MC ✔️Entertaining and thought-provoking philosophies ✔️Satisfying fight scenes Most of all, it’s a finished novel. No need to wait for the chapters.

Love this, but I'm dreading that I will catch up too soon. Wish there were more chapter and faster release schedule. And than you author for this amazing book😁😁😁😁😁😁❤❤❤❤

It's a nice book, but the author should post many chapters at once. I'm thinking of dropping for a while if it continues this slow once it hit 60 i may be back

This part of the character-building phase shows that he was a normal young man living on his father's farm just a few weeks ago. Now, he is indeed part of the underworld and even a small gang boss. However, he is still a normal young man trying to profit slightly from the situation while offering what help he can. After being betrayed by that family, he was plunged into an unnecessary gang war against a well-established gang that is much stronger and more connected than his own. This betrayal stemmed from the greed of that family for money. You will understand his actions better when you see the number of casualties that result from that gang war. Character-building novels often feel slow in the early stages but become very enjoyable as they progress. I encourage you to give it another try as the story advances. Lastly, thank you for the review. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback, even if you were dissatisfied. I wish you a great day!

Previously known as The Mafia Empire, now titled Kingdom Building in Another World Starting with The Mafia Empire. I haven’t changed much; in fact, the first 100 chapters are almost exactly the same. I made some changes after chapter 100, making the mafia war less brutal. Although, as you all know, it's still definitely more brutal than what is portrayed. Unfortunately, I have to tone it down because Webnovel doesn't support true historical accuracy and prefers fictionalized drama, hugs, and shouting matches as if wars were ever solved by convincing people. Aside from that, the main themes and plot remain exactly the same. Have fun! For new readers: Don’t worry about the above; just dive in and enjoy the story! I’m leaving the first 60 chapters free so everyone can thoroughly experience the story and decide if it’s worth their time and money. Regarding Patreon: Am I going to set up a Patreon for this novel with affordable tiers cheaper than what is offered in Webnovel like I did with the previous one? Yes, definitely. Will there be special offers, like before? Absolutely. Early access and mass releases? Yes, I’ll provide those too. When will the Patreon for this novel be available? I’m not sure yet, but not anytime soon. Right now, I’m at a critical stage of wrapping up the first novel with a perfect ending. After that, there will be promotions for its conclusion, readjustments, and the cancellation of early access. These tasks will keep me busy for a while. However, rest assured, daily releases for this novel won’t be interrupted, and weekend mass releases will still be available. Enjoy the story, and thank you for reading!

damn i never noticed the similarity before

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