I just started this book but so far i can say that the system description and the way the author also wrote the character devopment really aided with the visual images in my head.
Great work!👍🏾
The large estate sat at the end of a long walk, the path large enough for carriages to travel up and down, two at a time. The building at the end of the drive was grand in the best sense of the word, with two stories and plenty of windows along the front looking out on the grounds. White pillars extended in the front on either side of the door. The walls were a light blue like the clear sky Parisa could sometimes see whenever the clouds let up.
The first chapter made me feel bad for Parisa, she seems like a sweet girl and doesn't deserve allat. but I'm curious so i NEED to continue and find out whats next!
There was something about lying on her back as she gazed up at the beam of moonlight that came through her small window that always entranced Parisa. The moonbeam destroyed all discomfort that came with the day. It didn't matter that there was a chill to the air, or that she had little more than an old thin blanket to cover her skinny, naked body. Dirt and dust particle swam in the air, a constant reminder of her namesake; fairies.
good book. I'll admit i was hooked from the synopsis and i love how it's going so far just had to drop this comment and a review.
Amazing work author👍🏾