Nyxane

finally an mc whos not in college with a cheating gf. +1 man.

why is he acting like he is on another world? he thinks he is stiil in a game so this reply is idiotic, not to mention I dont think anyone would talk like that to an NPC

i wish u luck, keep grinding !

So here are my honest thoughts, Since the protagonist is so OP giving him a proper challenge is hard, as you must've figured out, which is a barrier to good progression. Give it some thought as to how you can present a challenge without making it seem like going over the top suddenly(like battling the gods and then making heavens shake, I'm exaggerating but u get the point) Second, this story lacks a direction, its hard to determine if its a SOL judging by how the story is so far or adventure as I expected (or everyone did) it to be. Give the mc a purpose, like was it really luck that he good all these skills or does it have a reason and make him go search for that mystery etc. I'm repeating again HAVING A PROPER DIRECTION IS NECESSARY. or else general readers will quit after a few chapters. Third, the narrative feels very odd. It feels like a diary or a journal(observations) of a stalker of mc then the mc himself. This makes relating with the mc hard which u don't want. Read some established ones and see how they handle the flow. My recommendation is Shadow slave. I'm not promoting it but just telling u to analyse how he narrates the statements in such a way that they feel organic. And fourth, the info dumps should be handled carefully. The previous chapters had many big info dumps which takes the reader "out of the experience" or "immersion". introduce your worldbuilding gradually. its hard but pays of well. I know u are far into the story and its realistically impossible to refine already published chapters so keep in mind to check for these in newer chapters. Im a little broke so I cant buy the later chapters but I hope this helps. Anyway good luck!

sorry man, I was away for quite a while so I was unable to respond. lemme give it a quick read once again to jog my memory.

yes, whimper is okay, since she is little annoyed and still playful.

weird statement🤔

bikini armour has the best defences, its the universal truth ✨

yeah true.

yup thats the one