Adriana7885

This was a very good read ………………………………………..

This is very likely just ai written

The story is good my only issue would be the writing quality since it is a bit confusing. I also can’t seem to get emotionally attached to it since it’s too fast paced and even at chapter 15 the mc only seems to be attached to one character. Here is an example from chapter 15: “Second, transfiguration will blind all of the same type in a single lump, from which it will be possible to get factions with the desired characteristics. Of course, this is a noticeable overconsumption of power, but each spell makes the wizard a tiny fraction stronger. The same Dumbledore for a hundred years so evolved that I am against its background a modest fire of a tired traveler, against a flaming haystack doused with gasoline.”

WHY JUST WHY EVEN TELL HER ALL UR SECRETS UGH

WHY JUST WHY

It was starting off so good and interesting then I got to chapter 9 and like he immediately became a cringey simp for the sect master when before he described himself as a monk. Worst part is he spoke his cringey thoughts out loud where he could’ve gotten killed while he’s so weak right now. In summary: Cringey Simp Seems like more girls attracted to him? Weak af Not smart Honestly if you don’t mind this then you might like this but it just wasn’t it for me.

Ugh ugh ugh there’s male mc with two females so harem ig?

It was a train wreck, almost like an ai wrote this. I disliked it very much overall

It’s a nice and quick fast paced read with a bit of romance. I liked it overall.

I really was loving it up till deaths happened and his personality basically changed. It felt rushed and just wasn’t the same after that but I did love the writing quality before THAT certain event happened.