Blue_Hell52

Is this going to be a small harem story if so just Yuki and Sukura would be perfect!!

Didn’t charizard faint with noivern? Or can he heal them so fast he used him again?

Or really anything with certain amount of killing intent like from solo leveling when they had a small amount the system didn’t activate until it was full on killing intent If you know what I mean.

DUDE!!!!!! OHHH MY WORD!!! I’ve been waiting for him to say that!! About to yell like I’m going into battle!!! So sick and I so excited to see this go farther!!! Keep up the great work author!!

Sorry about your phone and laptop! All in all hope you get better so I pray healing over you my friend! Keep up the good work in this story!!

Random thought what do trainers do with the exchanged Pokémon items like transferring a Pokémon from a regular poke ball to a great ball? Does it go in the trash or can he re-sell those items like a thrift store?

Shouldn’t it be a galaid instead? Or is this completely AU logic?

Good start to a new fanfic!! I would just think about when you want to show something new on the system panel like when you showed everything on the system panel then you gained a new item then you rewrote the entire system panel again I would just do a shorter version of it like Name:…. Demon Name:… System inventory: Dagger(new) Or something like that so you don’t have to constantly show the whole status page unless you haven’t in the chapter as a whole. But overall great work so far!! Keep up the good work!!

Also would really love to see another Pokémon POV chapter or piece in the next few chapters. Also Nidoking is one of my favorite Pokémon so I’m glad you have one in this story!!!

I know shits going down between axel and everyone else. Mainly just the fact that it feels like one of those Chinese novels where there are the prodigious young masters and they have everything and if they don’t have it they kill you because you do have it. Overall I really like this story and can see it going to a few thousand chapters and I’m so excited to see where this story continues!!