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meh, feels like everyone is just there as side character and hyping him up. Felt unnecessary . Also him shouting to kill is already massive misconduct
more paragraph are needed .
does anyone know which pokemon eventually it is ? I searched the mtl, but it says kiras, which i don't understand, which pokemon it is
I haven't read all the chapters, but I feel like I have got a grasp on the story. First of all, with all the essence you've given your mc, it'll take an incredible amount of effort not to make him an op . Your story sentences are a bit messy . Some casual crass words are thrown here and there, which I don't believe is necessary. he acts too much like a teen and a person with too much of a bleeding heart, which I just don't like in a mc . I'm not saying to make him a gary sue . I'm just asking him to be a cautious reincarnated person. Anyway, good luck on your endeavours
This is game information right ? So, i can assume , this might not applicable here. Otherwise , honestly mega garchomp is honestly my favourite mega evolution design along with mega sceptile
This chapter is absurd. Wth is happening here ?
why though ??
I'm not sure about this . It's the beginning of 2010s where social media is still at its infancy. I don't think a player from malaga will have such fame to get media attention especially only after preseason
first student is always Hannah abbot. Was surprised when it was Hermione
this is just a massive plot hole. Just for the sake of it. if he didn't see thor 2 , doesn't mean he hasn't seen endgame or he just said that he's a big marvel fan . So how he didn't see mcu movies