DarkiAntiArki

Completely butchering itachis character, ranting and filling chapters with pointless and repetitive ai generated details… Thought I was in for a cold calculating protagonist, not an emotionally driven child stuck pondering his irrelevant past.

U baiting now?

…

It’s fine… you book is pretty great. The abyss world was a bit of a slump though. While thing is similar to ‘journey of the fate destroying emperor’

What is this repeated stuff I’m paying for

It’s fine I don’t need to know… as long as it’s articulated and displayed well in the novel theirs no point in discussions

I understand them having a friendly bias within each other due to seeing themselves or their hardships in one another… but within like 24 hours that bias turned into an intense life and death realtionship. I just felt it was to fast. While I just thought of the ghost turning evil as I guess taking damage and it’s effect would be reduced in reality due to the previous rule. And the fact this outcome was in a trial rather than seemingly reality

Also the reward from the tower seem unfair… sure aquiring mythic rarity is fine though you don’t do a good job disinguishimg the rarity with power level… I don’t believe he should get tier 9 things when he’s tier 2-3 even though he can fight higher tier existence… the rational for his strength seems odd as well… they way your describe it, you can tier up as long as you know how and have a stat that is the pinnacle of the current tier… so increased power beyond your tier is fine as long as you have multiple stats at the pinnacle of your tier… idk

He doesn’t know if the trial is reality or illusion… he makes a monster his guide once he relized her intelligence… the monster follows only for her rationized safety but they form a bond for some reason I don’t understand he feels the need to give up the trial or his life because the guide gets injured (he suspects died)— that’s pretty much it broken down but… his body outside the trial seems to be influenced from his body inside the trial, even though it’s not specified it feels like a 1 to 1 mirror of his situation inside the tower. Even though it’s stated his body in real life should only reflect half the damages from in side the tower

Why does he make these stupidly intimate connections with people he barely knows so far as to die for them… it’s so annoying how unrealistic everything feels