Branco_Veliz

I'm sorry but it's just that you suddenly came here and insulted something for which I stay until late at night and also outside of writing I also have personal problems so when I read your comment I got angry and well I sent everything to hell.

Yes, I'm sorry, but I don't really specialize in professional writing, they put it in fanfic for that reason, so I don't worry so much about it, but if it were an original novel I would be much more focused on all aspects of the novel.

please go and read again because if you didn't realize he wasn't the one who kissed the femboy the femboy gave him a kabedon and stole a kiss, keyword: robbery, and the main character did nothing for his trust and the slight feelings that the development for the femboy, now if with all said, go seek attention elsewhere.

Forgive me, but if you are not going to read and you only come looking for the attention that your family does not give you, please go and look for it elsewhere and in silence, please.

I had planned #harem do you have any idea of ​​any waifu? It is a multiverse chat so it can be from any anime, novel, movie and so on.

thank you very much, that was very good to hear, or rather read... ∑d(°∀°d)

by the way I speak Spanish and I only use the google translator for, well, translate, the chapter

ehm I don't understand what you mean, tell me what you don't understand and I'll explain the best I can

actually I write like this because if I don't feel uncomfortable doing some paragraphs differently because I feel that my vision of my work deviates from my objective

well if actually I was only going to make him about 18-20 years old, I have some 16-17 schoolmates out there who are parents, so I hadn't planned to make him about 30-40 years old so don't worry too much about that thing about him being middle-aged or something, and as far as character development, actually I just write as if I'm the one in that situation so I try to put more feeling into my writing because otherwise I'd quickly lose interest to continue writing, and thanks for commenting on your opinion, by the way sorry for writing a whole testament