CX_Darthsomali

She's not a side chick, you'll see that Edythe is the perfect girl for Madara. Anyway tell me what you think about the chapter, was it too short did I execute it properly or did something feel off.

Sorry about that, I hope you enjoy this chapter.

no, it's not dropped. I've had a lot of personal problems that I had to navigate through so I couldn't concentrate on this project. I apologize.

Thanks for the advice i'll take it to heart and do my best.

If you're not pleased you can be on you're marry way. This is my first ever fanfiction and story so at least I'm trying but your out here making gramatic errors with something as simple as writing trash so excuse me if I don't listen to you oppinion.

Don't worry man we'll get there it's just a matter of how to execute the romance. It's inevitable you know.

That really is a weird question. Let's see here, even in the anime we know madara was too busy to think about woman so i would assume no as the create of this fic I've decided that madara hasn't had any relations with woman. This is maybe something emmet would teas him about in the future a 2500 year old virgin.

what do you consider not dud then, tell me so I can improve my writing.

He just looks like a younger madara, but his age is also a bit hard to pinpoint

Well if you knew how long it takes to write a chapter go through it chek grammar errors and plot holes then you wouldn't be saying this. Peace and stay tuned for the next chapter.