Lol1san

No one is forcing you to comment just because you disagree with me, You are intolerant! And :

Chapter 234 and I dropped. I don't remember who said this novel is not a cliché, but I sincerely curse him. Mc always fights against stronger opponents and wins. In conversations and thought process he is a complete idiot. Just like the proud Chinese novel pratogs, he is honest and doesn't lie (only sometimes he doesn't speak, instead of lying, and other idiots believe what they make up in their heads. JUST cliché). He is not even a little bit cunning, his supposed cunning and intelligence is determined by the low IQ NPCs created by the author. But despite all this, this is not the reason why I dropped the novel, it's the cultivation realms nonsense created by the author. His wife, who started cultivating with him on the same level as him after they left inheritince together, still was on the same level as him in chapter 234! Some people might say what's the big deal, so let me explain: Mc has a heavenly treasure that purifies Qi and increases his cultivation speed, he is an alchemist, he has an ungraded technique for his cultivation - Monarch Eternal Body (his wife's is only Saint-LowGrade) and he has a cultivation treasure that speeds up the world around him by 10 times compared to the outside - Stone of time. In short, they started cultivating at similar levels and now they are both at the same level. What took Mc months to breakthrough the realm, his wife breakthrough it in 10 days! Reason? - None! The only thing that makes her such a cultivating machine instead of the Mc is that the Author want to be her that way. I mean, it's so obvious that he keeps giving her pointless power-ups, supposedly to avoid making her a vase. Sometimes even he forgets to write down the reason. I mean, I can't understand how he can breakthrough realms the here and climb the cultivation realms like climbing a ladder. Mc uses the same pills she uses, his cultivation time is way more than her and he has the treasure/techniques I wrote above, but he's still on the same fking level as her!!! The only difference in cultivation may be the difference in quality. But that doesn't make any sense to me either! Every time Mc's cultivation level rises, so does the level of the opponent he can fight against. And us, as a reader, we wait for action and try to figure out what the limit him is this time. If the d♡♡n cultivation realms don't work for him and even a regular guy can catch him after a while, why did you put him there as a cultivator! If you had just put Super-Man, we would have read it. Because according to the cultivation system of the world, his fighting prowess is no fun at all!!! He's always fighting stronger opponents. That's why he's cautious at first, then he wins after hard process. I was so bored while I was reading that even dropped novel because his wife on the same level with him for no reason and no logic, and this made me realize how pointless his cultivation speed/talent was and I fall the novel down. Next time, if the author is going to write a cultivation novel, he should first give his characters some brains. Then give his Mc and the other living characters a sensible cultivating system. Let them not randomly achieve the success that Mc has achieved through his ordeal for no reason.

You're just polluting the webnovel with this garbage fiction. Your constant deletion of comments will not stop people from pointing out how garbage your fiction and writing is. Just accept it and put a warning somewhere next time if you are going to write cuckold Mc!

40 different world = 40 Gwen. Ladies and Gentlemen, We all know where this is going...

Put a villain tag, otherwise you'll have to deal with idiots like this. They're pacifists when it comes to Spider-Man. I thought this chap was pretty good, btw.

The synopsis of this novel is this: I'm an Asgardian beta cuck and I don't mind sharing my lover just so I can fk others. .. .. Warning: Yuri NTR

Well, I'll wait for a rage scene, but even then, it will be a big disappointment if he can't show his powers properly. Because for both Saiyan and Doomsday sides reach their potential, he have to fight. And as for the romance part... I don't know, it feels, it will be forced here. I'll wait and see. I'm fine as long as it doesn't ruin the story...

Dude, Mc is a symbiotic creature, what do you expect? If necessary, it can grow big enough to swallow the planet and destroy civilizations. If I remember correctly, it's in their genetic memory. They were created for this purpose. Besides, mc is no longer human and it swallows not for breakfast but to grow. Just look up venom wiki and you'll see how the species evolves. For super-humans, He can transfer their powers to his own genome like he did here in spider girl. He can go after special people for the sake of power.

I get it, man, if it's inexperience, that's fine, but I'm talking from the other side's point of view. The idea of merging with a sentient and intelligent being like venom can be disgusting. For Spider-man, it was. I would have expected a little more reaction and objection from Gwen. Other than that, everything is good. Right now, he's transferred her powers into his genome. Can he do the same to mutants in the future? Or is he going to do a mutant hunt Xd?

How can you make someone with Saiyan-doomsday power and Dna a pacifist and a loser with human emotions ? With that much power, he's just trash. He's a combination of two Op bodies and you still make him a nice guy. You know he doesn't need to be grateful to those girls, right? With his own power, let alone their pathetic power, he could take down the research center in seconds. I think it's bad for this story that you gave him past human memories from the earth, very bad. You could have done it like your Tdg fiction and things would have gone much more naturally and well. It would have been original in the reactions, but now he will always hold herself back because of those 'precious' memories.