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Violi1yrPublicado porIt was a nice story. the gaps between the dialogs were just right! Conversation between the characters were also good ones. Specially the leads characters were interesting. Hope to read more from you. Keep going!! Wish you luck!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It was a nice story. the gaps between the dialogs were just right! Conversation between the characters were also good ones. Specially the leads characters were interesting. Hope to read more from you. Keep going!! Wish you luck!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It was a nice story. But honestly I think it could be improved a bit more if you try a little harder. The gaps between the dialogs were okay. Conversation between the characters were also okay. Nonetheless, hope to read more from you. Keep going!! Wish you luck!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It was a nice story. the gaps between the dialogs were just right! Conversation between the characters were also good ones. Specially the system thing was good. Hope to read more from you. Keep going!! Wish you luck!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
Este libro ha sido eliminado. - Violi1yrrespondió a Amaza_Rashi
I'll try.. Thank you for mentioning it.
(Going back to the story ,a week before) Sancia who was unconscious laying near the sea shore gained her first consciousness. The sun was shining brightly over her head. It took her sometime to adjust to the bright light. She then noticed the crashing sound of the waves. - Violi1yrrespondió a Amaza_Rashi
It's a type of car. Mainly small cars are referred as microcar...short form micro
However, when she reached at the entrance of the alley ,suddenly, a micro stopped and a strong muscled man put a handkerchief under her nose even before she could react . She started to lose her consciousness again. She was definitely kidnapped!