Rhys_Gray

if they are supposed to be the most feared race shouldn't his fights be one sided like seriously is he just that weak or is he strong

one of the best pokemon fanfics I have read please keep going

bats

this is how naruto should have been love the fact that they made haku his lover and lost one.

good story and I like the fact that there is no danzo

very good story I like the fact that he has no bloodline but a clan and no cheats other than perfect recall and he acts logicaly please keep going

good story finally not a uchiha and a Nara as I always thought that they should be more powerful than they looked

he's a funking kaiju why in the he'll is he so weak literally and there is this thing called training

good start lots of detail , good powers , wake up call start training get stronger.

good novel little slow in places but new concept is good