Hello everyone, this is Mao. I'm an aspiring writer as it is my dream to be an author one day. I can't express how excited I am to be a part of this writing community, as this is my first time that I will sharing my works with others like me. Though I am nervous about it at the same time, haha. I have read my share of amazing writers and I'm so happy how so many are unique and has their own skills. I hope to make some new friends here and share our ideas and inspire each other to continue our writing talents. Thank you all so much.
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sorry I don't know why but the character profile pic is so blurry. that's why I am adding Mifa's pic here.
So I will leave my honest review here. First of all, even though I have only read the four chaps, but the beginning were very interesting and you can feel the effort of the author to pull out the beginning.Furthermore the pace was so good but it needs little bit of editing then it will be perfect.
OP MC!
it escalated quickly
Don't tell me there is a bomb inside!
Use 'so' instead of 'very' here. Just a personal advice, you can ignore it.
He sounds like trouble 🧐
why did I read that as Ho-Me instead of home? my mind is out of commission 🙃
So I will leave a review here. First of all, even though I have only read the four chaps, but the beginning were portrayed vividly and you can feel the effort of the author to pull out the beginning. I have to say the details of the character is eye catching.Furthermore the pace was so good that you didn't even notice that you finished the chapters. but it needs little bit of editing then it will be perfect.
oh no