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I liked it, although the mc seems very op, compared to other stories it seems good to me, also that it is not a harem adds points even if the romance is a bit rushed, well the whole story goes very fast, keep it up author. (Google translator)

The idea was fine at first but I realized that the mc is going to be weak and will have to be protected by his children, from what I understand, patriarchs or leaders in general are strong, intelligent or have some special ability. The system is one of the worst I've seen, I saw many comments that said it's realistic and when someone wanted the mc to be stronger and they asked me what's realistic about a baby being born in 2 weeks, I left it in chapter 22 I didn't want to keep wasting time (Google translator).

At the beginning it was fine but everything went to shit, the mc who is the most intelligent has the power to read the mind and influence it, it is supposed that he had everything planned for him to become stronger with a serum he created, but it seems that his super intelligence and his powers are useless, after he left for two months it seems that homelander replaced the mc because he stole a serum that made him more powerful, characters betrayed the mc, homelander made chaos until he stole Ryan, who was an important experimental subject for him, is supposed to be the smartest, he even has an artificial intelligence that had everything under control and he couldn't think that they were going to steal a serum that was in a Fucking safe, after this I couldn't take the mc seriously and even when he had already absorbed the serum he didn't even show up to stop homelander, you can't expect much from a fanfic but this is at the top of those who start off well and ruin it by forcing the plot. (google translator) xD

I love the fact that he doesn't Stupidly choose to help anyone who comes across him, that he has no mercy when it comes to his well-being and his hive etc, but have compassion sometimes. (google traductor)

disappointment someone op and reincarnated is Shit if it is not the mc, even with his talent and money he destroys the mc, and although he says that with the system later on he will be stronger than her practically not even lumus knows how to throw, where it is specified that she does not know how to throw either does he have a system?, not even the mc system knows who he is, I thought he would improve when he argued with bellatrix but it seems he is even afraid of rose, his revenges are just words, the fanfic is not for me there will be others who like it Not me.

I hope the mc doesn't like her, I even prefer hermione to rose.

I thought I was going to be disappointed but I'm liking the story.

it can give you the best occlumency knowledge but it can't heal your body

why try to protect her if she is stronger than the mc, it seemed interesting to me before reading that no matter what the mc does he will not be stronger than his sister. (Google translator)

bueno el autor lo quiere débil.