AkitoTakahashi

To think that the author put this off for almost a year. One of Scribes' other works has been read by us. Notwithstanding, romance novels can be a hilarious read for us, based on how they're written. Now onto the review! Can I call this a captivating tale that transcends the boundaries of other love stories? Yes and no. Arjun (a bookworm) and Lila don't seem to have any chemistry. That is, until Scribes transports them to another world. How's that for a hook? There's definitely some magic involved that's likely to make things emotional if the story progresses. You can almost consider this more of an adventure tale because of the aforementioned supernatural occurrence. The author's known for pacing issues, and this story has the same problem. Of course, it's not a huge issue since it's a love story. Let's just see how he keeps up the momentum.

I'd first like to commend the author on the cover. Looks authentic. Now onto the review. Once again, we have the mixing of myth, fantasy, and adventure. Now, things like that aren't our cup of tea, as some of you may know. But the author was compelling enough to get me to read, and read I did. Perhaps it's the Indian mysticism or the martial realm that surrounds Vijay. Speaking of the MC, the other characters are somewhat relatable. But that comment's subjective. The grandmother, though. Lol. Let's talk about the word world-building: striking, a lot of history, and some strangeness to it. Apart from that, the prose wasn't half bad. It's probably the spiritual undertones that don't sit with me. The narrative can also suffer from pacing issues. Can't sleep on the author's integration of cultural elements. I'll assume they're from India. I mean, it was pretty obvious from the start.

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Great question. Yes because some of our readers are not knowledgably as others. Notwithstanding, explanations are greatly reduced as the story progresses. Thank you for taking the time read!

Realmente apreciamos este comentario. Por eso, hemos publicado otro capítulo antes de lo previsto. ¡Muchas gracias por leer!

Truly a captivating novel. Basically, it follows Cassian Black, son of the oppressive Association Utopia (AU). In this new world, powers are in the form of these bracelets called "Bands." From the moment Zephorya's introduced, I, as a reader, quite enjoyed the world-building. It's new, authentic, and checks off everything from diverse culture to a systematic political structure and epic fight scenes. The concept of Bands is the best part. Cassian's quite the relatable protagonist, a young man caught in between his family's legacy and the rebel factions. His journey of self-discovery is what can really grab the reader's attention. He's not like those clueless protagonists that hardly know what they're doing; he's straight, upright, and isn't afraid to get his hand dirty. The plot also has an expert pace to it, with lots of twists and unexpected encounters. I'm really interested to see what his rival, Cyrus, and the rebel faction, Libra, are all about. The writing itself is immersive, with vivid descriptions that make Zephorya almost a world in its own right. I also like how action scenes have clarity to them. Just simply an enthralling read, to which I hope the author(s) don't abandon this gem.

Here we have a story mixed with historical and fantasy elements. I can already tell you that Alberto... Sorry, I mean Lt. Alberto, has some crazy goals in mind after being reincarnated. There's themes of duty, sacrifice, and rebirth—which is quite common for novels like this one. Black does an interesting job showing off the world-building. Not too bad of a new universe. The battles with mythical creatures were also a tad interesting. What more can you want in a fantasy realm? However, despite its strong premise, the pacing could use some work, particularly during exposition-heavy sections. Some readers may not have a problem with it, though. It's commendable nonetheless and could benefit from a tighter focus to maintain narrative momentum. A cover for the novel would also be pleasing to see. Other than that, interesting work there, Black.

Here we are back at Sarthak's novel. So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting. They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.

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