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TheBlackstar

TheBlackstar

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2022-09-12 Se unióGlobal
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
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    You are now one of my esteemed employees !😱

    "What I'm saying is, you don't have to serve me as much anymore. You volunteered to work for me until death, but I do not want that for you, Sephora," she explained. "You've shown me your loyalty, and I want to treat you accordingly. That's why I want you here in this palace, not as my handmaid, but as a future member of my court."
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    Cupid Royale
    Fantasía · The_Vntage_Pen
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    Comentado por

    Sounds like an elf name, I’m calling it!!

    He chuckled and took Aiyana's hand, saying, "This is my wife, Sylvanwee," then gesturing to me, he added, "She is her handmaid."
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    Cupid Royale
    Fantasía · The_Vntage_Pen
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    respondió a The_Vntage_Pen

    Ah other races are more advanced than humans so the humans are behind in terms of technology

    Ch 7 Meeting the president
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    Astral Dogma
    Fantasía · TheBlackstar
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    respondió a The_Vntage_Pen

    Ah the mystery~

    Ch 3 The Crimson Phoenix
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    Astral Dogma
    Fantasía · TheBlackstar
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    Comentado por

    I love orlas country accent so much-

    "Is this not to your likin', Your Highness?" Orla asked and got an instant hiss from Melisandre.
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    Cupid Royale
    Fantasía · The_Vntage_Pen
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    Comentado por

    Is this a GL?

    I watched as her pacing grew more intense by the second, I watched as she kept moving back and forth soliloquizing. I have never seen her this much agitated, her well manicured fingers kept running through her light ginger hair as she kept bumping into furniture occasionally and wincing at the pain. Each time she does, I rush to her but she just waves me away and goes back to pacing.
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    Cupid Royale
    Fantasía · The_Vntage_Pen
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    respondió a DaoistTct9Uh

    Thank you! I try to implement real life physics/ science into this novel

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    Astral Dogma
    Fantasía · TheBlackstar
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar1mth
    respondió a Jin_Kazama_2727

    Yeah that’s something I was also wondering if you would find😅

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    Astral Dogma
    Fantasía · TheBlackstar
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar6mth
    Comentado por

    I just noticed I wrote something similar to this paragraph too lol

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: soul seed Konquerors
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    Destiny Divine: The Divine Threads
    Fantasía · SHADOW_IV
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar6mth
    Comentado por

    JJBA reference?

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    Destiny Divine: The Divine Threads
    Fantasía · SHADOW_IV
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar6mth
    Publicado por

    The story is pretty good so far, I like the good old fashioned magic power system and races, the pacing is pretty good too. I’m also writing something similar to your work feel free to check it out!

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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar6mth
    Comentado por

    Probably idk but still pretty good

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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar6mth
    Publicado por

    I like the overall creativity when it comes to the naming of the characters and the slow but steady world building. Over all it’s pretty good. I’m also writing something similar to your work feel free to check it out!

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    Destiny Divine: The Divine Threads
    Fantasía · SHADOW_IV
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  • TheBlackstar
    TheBlackstar6mth
    respondió a Celestial_Blood917

    Same here but I just do it in teaching or revealing moments

    The first 40 chapters may contain a lot of info dumps. With me being relatively new at this, a lot of info dumps happened. Not going to lie, before I started writing I didn't even know this term existed. That's how bad it is.
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasía · Entrail_JI
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