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ShiroNirvana2mthrespondió a itsDhiAlright, good luck with your book.
"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch."- ShiroNirvana2mthrespondió a ShiroNirvana
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"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana2mthComentado por
I've read so many fanfics, that apparently I'm starting to lose patience with certain things, like for example all this unnecessary talk, just killing everyone there without 2 seconds would be wonderful, so that all this talk is meaningless.
"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana2mthComentado por'It seems like the plot will follow this time,' Kaylon thought. He could see the fate of the two families, and indeed, they will fall in the battle against the black dragon. Hmm, that means the plot will be similar to the original storyline, which is good, a bit boring but at least it will be stable. (Don't worry, with the MC's intervention, the plot will change; I'm not one of those authors who are afraid to change the plot).
- ShiroNirvana3mthComentado por
Honestly, after chapters 50, this fanfic got really bad, it wasn't very good before, now it's just history repeating itself and the mc making no changes, it's extremely boring and should have been finished much sooner and quickly, the only The reason I still read is because I hope that the next dimension will be more fun.
Ch 80 Chapter 80 Kale - ShiroNirvana3mthComentado porCh 30 Chapter 30 Vs Buu
- ShiroNirvana3mthComentado por
finally did something
"It seems I have no choice left," a voice sounded. Piccolo and others startled, looked at the direction of the sound, including Buu, turned and glanced at Eero, revealing his body. - ShiroNirvana3mthComentado por
And I'm very sad, when the mc chose the Dragon Ball verse, I was excited, but you, the author, skipped practically all the best Arcs, and it's likely that in the Majin Buu arc the mc won't do anything either, at least I think it's impossible for him to make it strong enough then little time.
Ch 14 Chapter 14 Meeting - ShiroNirvana3mthComentado porCh 121 I am Lady Focalors Dog
- ShiroNirvana3mthComentado porCh 118 Didn't he come to Heaven Dou City as a tourist?
- ShiroNirvana4mthComentado porCh 60 Chapter 60: Like all things yet like God
- ShiroNirvana4mthComentado por
It's a fanfic, I actually hope you create more different and powerful jutsus for MC, I wouldn't mind, especially because I love MC OP
Este libro ha sido eliminado. - ShiroNirvana5mthrespondió a AlmightySkyDxddy
- ShiroNirvana6mthrespondió a TomTucker777
I believe it's just sea water.
While a feeling of weakness did overcome him, the running shower was just enough water to barely activate the curse. If Chiba had to guess, he assumed he was at 85-90% strength.