Mood_Acle
I am of few talents, writing is one I possess.
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Mood_Acle4mthComentado porCh 1 Taking a Shi- Sit on the Throne- Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 162 Announcement
- Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 160 The Beginning of The End
- Mood_Acle1yrComentado por'I'm a glorified f****** gardener!'
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pretty strong
If he can jump a whole rank as a Chosen, how strong will he be as an Enlightened? - Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 263 Chapter 262: Teleportation 0.2
- Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 82 Chapter 81: Cancer
- Mood_Acle1yrrespondió a Baka_asta_
The whole point of the novel is about magic and staying somewhat lowkey unless there is some type mind type skill where he can do that, there is no chance the pressure skill can exist. There is also the fact that 'bloodlust' exists which is essentially the same thing.
'Samantha Hall… when did she get behind me?' he thought, though he swept away his sight from them for a minute, he didn't think she'd approach him much less ask for a dance! - Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 240 Chapter 239: Clash & consequences
- Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 109 Soldiers Test
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This is not the most in-depth review but I’ pointing out to things that kind of threw me from the flow. Little bit of a spoiler. The point of view switches over to Emma and I don’t really know how to describe it other than dissapointment? I like when she and her brother were together and the point of veiw encompassed them. I feel like the switch to Spright from the kidnapping was excellent but when you tied in Timi and then switched to Emma it kind of felt lousy but I know could not achieve something like that. Spoiler end. Outside of that complaint, I find Spright to be a more compelling charac than Emma, there, I said it. I think the way how you write her to me, brings down the character score but not by much since Spright is there. The writing quality of the story is superb and the most interesting part of the story, to me, is the world. The world building is excellent even though sometimes it is a bit of a pecker to get a sense of direction. Maybe in the future I’ll make a map or something. I find the system of power to be very refreshing in this story as it isn’t a lit rpg rip off. It seems to be a sucker to gain power in and I love it. It gives a pit of anticipation of who he’s gotta kill next, even though it sounds a bit morbid. Good Job! You mad lad. This story is gonna be awesome~ 🕺 Writing Quality : 5 Updating Stability : 4 Story Development : 5 Character Design: 3 World Background: 4
- Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 104 Gauntlet
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Dear Goooooooooooood! This character is insufferable!
"Yay! U-Uh, I mean, that's only natural that you accepted me, commoner!" - Mood_Acle1yrComentado porCh 69 Tagged Jack
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Augh the fluff , my heart, aaaaaahhh 😩
Suddenly, he felt two calloused hands on his shoulders, one small and one large. And then, the Might duo pulled him into a painful bear hug that brutally crushed away the previous anxiety that he was feeling. All he felt now was pain and a weird mix of comfort at their affection. - Mood_Acle1yrComentado por
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'I don't want to hurt him too much because I looked into the future where I didn't hurt him too much and I was satisfied with what was going to happen. An anonymous person (me) exposes what he did to people and destroys his career. His family and friends abandon him, especially his wife and daughter. Left on his own and desperate, the former president starts begging for money, but that doesn't last long either. When his enemies in the economic world realize his fragile state, they immediately kidnap him and torture him. He is then sold as a slave to a gay club. There he spends the rest of his life getting his ass fucked by random guys. I think it's a good ending for someone who likes to fuck.' - Mood_Acle1yrrespondió a grandis
This is not a one piece fanfic…
'Samantha Hall… when did she get behind me?' he thought, though he swept away his sight from them for a minute, he didn't think she'd approach him much less ask for a dance! - Mood_Acle1yrComentado por
meet me at our spooooot caught a vibe
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Fff
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