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I really enjoy this novel—it's a blast to read! The main character's power-ups are exciting, especially the ability to see the future. It's like getting hints from other books I've enjoyed. I hope the story keeps going strong, and I'm happy to pay for more chapters

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Awesome. the book is well written whether in plot direction and character details looking forward to more chapters

don't always write the Jerry part it makes the mc look like some pathetic trash

don't always write the Jerry part it makes the mc look like some pathetic trash

nice

The story development is not good.it makes it think there is no corresponding part and entirely depends on nonsense dialogues.

the story is good but it has two versions in it so we can't understand at all. try to write only one path bro you are confusing the readers. like the alliance of god's two versions of beta and Bella.

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it is a nice introduction to the book