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Hungry_Daoist4 days agoComentado porgood chapter today.
- Hungry_Daoist9 days agoPublicado por
It is a really nice story with good pacing. I like that the regular civilian life interaction, something which most world war stories do not show. It adds a lot of value to the story. As for the main character himself, he is well thought out, smart and confident but not so confident that he comes across as cocky to the reader. I hope he himself is being set up for some character development later in the story. As for right now, I home that we can get a more detailed scene setting, they are good but I think it can be more detailed.
- Hungry_Daoist11 days agoComentado por
Good chapter!
- Hungry_Daoist12 days agoComentado por
Did you forget the knucke dusters? Also, what is with the extra ] on the end of the sentence?
- Hungry_Daoist13 days agoComentado por
it should show his age too, its kinda disappointing that it does not.
- Hungry_Daoist20 days agoComentado por
I thought it was 20 years. From 120 to 140 is 20 and not 30.
- Hungry_Daoist20 days agoComentado por
are there half-step into the next realm or is that not a thing here?
- Hungry_Daoist20 days agorespondió a Rai_Jin
so it looks like a 40-year old.
- Hungry_Daoist22 days agoComentado por
Jaime and Cersei were born 266 AC not 263 AC
- Hungry_Daoista month agoComentado por
600, how did it change to 700 suddenly?
